Jul 8, 2002 11:04
21 yrs ago
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German term

In Time, In Quality, und In Budget!

German to English Marketing IT (Information Technology)
Here’s an IT company’s motto – I get the gist of it, but thought I’d post it anyway.

In Time, In Quality, und In Budget!

In case it helps, here’s the sentence preceding it.
Wir passen die entwickelten Lösungen optimal in bestehende Systeme ein, und verstehen es umfangreiche Abläufe digital umzusetzten: [their motto].
Change log

Aug 22, 2008 11:16: Steffen Walter changed "Term asked" from "Motto" to "In Time, In Quality, und In Budget!" , "Field (specific)" from "(none)" to "IT (Information Technology)"

Discussion

Steffen Walter Aug 22, 2008:
Question found during own research... ... and I hasten to add that the source motto/slogan/tagline is atrocious "German" that should have never been used in the first place.
Non-ProZ.com Jul 8, 2002:
the sound of it Hi... um well, for one, I don't think one can say in budget in English and it seemed to me that this was just another case of a German company using English to sound more worldly or whatnot. Don't want them to sound too unprofessional or like dweebs... The sound of it was what my problem was... gz
Kim Metzger Jul 8, 2002:
Dear Gunilla, please tell us what your question/problem is.
Rolf Klischewski, M.A. Jul 8, 2002:
Aber... das Motto ist doch schon auf Englisch!?

Proposed translations

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Selected

Quality on Time and on Budget

What about changing the order?
Peer comment(s):

agree sylvie malich (X) : That's it!
21 mins
agree modilingua : yes, this is best
30 mins
Thx but that's Steffen's merit, he gave me the idea!
agree Cilian O'Tuama : "within budget" sounds better (to me)
34 mins
agree pschmitt : agree with Cilian
45 mins
agree Сергей Лузан : with Steffen's supplementation. "Top Quality on Time &/'n' Budget".
2 hrs
agree stefana
4 hrs
agree hartran (X) : agree with Cilian's remark. Within is definitely better. In English you don't do something on budget.
3 days 20 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Big thanks to all of you! It was hard to decide... wish I could split the points... gz "
8 mins

On time, in top quality and within the budget!

my take...
Peer comment(s):

neutral sylvie malich (X) : 'in top quality' doesn't work
1 hr
it certainly doesn't when it's taken out of context.
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+2
1 hr

what about...

simply using "on":

"on time, on quality (standards), on budget"

On time and on budget are 100% idiomatic business speak while "on quality" is IMO just a centimetre off mark - so go for it!

Agree that German IT co.s frequently tend to be "would-be Brits" or "would-be Americans" and go over the top in such attempts.

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Note added at 2002-07-08 12:41:20 (GMT)
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My credits to Eva, sounds even better than mine, except that I would then write: \"*Top* Quality on Time and on Budget\". Quality alone sounds too weak in the competitive world of today.
Peer comment(s):

agree Eva Blanar : Absolutely!
1 hr
thx for your kind comments
agree Сергей Лузан
3 hrs
thx Sergey
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1 hr

Meeting your requirements in terms of deadline, quality and budget.

A suggestion. I agree with you that something has to be changed from the original 'Englisch'.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Steffen Walter : Correct in terms of content but I'm afraid it's not catchy enough as a motto/slogan.
44 mins
I agree.
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8 hrs

quality implementionations of complex processes digitally – on time and without straining your budge

1. The original German sentence should have been introduced with dash and not a colon.

2. putting "quality" in the last sentence completely screws it up -- it simply doesn't belong there and so Iv'e put it in the previous sentence.

3. It doesn't appear that by "in budget" they mean "inexpensive," which I have taken some liberty with.

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Note added at 2002-07-08 19:26:03 (GMT)
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Sorry, in 3. I meant to write \"It appears...\"
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